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Thursday 18 October 2012

Julie


Julie at my school
always calls out the answer
before the teacher says it.
She dances old
school in the playground.
She always plays centre
for netball and never gives
anyone else a chance.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Tienira I really like your Julie poem and I liked the way you've shown us how she acts.

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  2. Hi Tienira I really love your julie poem its a really good awesome work.

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  3. Hi Tienira

    I really am interested in your julie poem it has very funny things put into it. I really enjoyed reading the part when she dances old school in the playground..Nice job!!

    Keep up the good work!!

    Chevy

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